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Stéphane Ducasse

http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

I would like to thank lusy and jeff for their effort.

Dear All,

let me introduce a new store "PharoShop"
http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

Please note the products description -
I'm not confident in my english and ready to accept your offers for inspire the customers :)

Have a great day!

Lusy

Guillermo Polito

Re: http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

Wow!!! That's nice!! :D

On Sat, Oct 12, 2013 at 6:53 AM, Stéphane Ducasse <[hidden email]> wrote:

I would like to thank lusy and jeff for their effort.

Dear All,

let me introduce a new store "PharoShop"
http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

Please note the products description -
I'm not confident in my english and ready to accept your offers for inspire the customers :)

Have a great day!

Lusy

Ben Coman

Re: http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

In reply to this post by Stéphane Ducasse

Stéphane Ducasse wrote:

I would like to thank lusy and jeff for their effort.

Dear All,

	let me introduce a new store "PharoShop"
	http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

	Please note the products description - 
	I'm not confident in my english and ready to accept your offers for inspire the customers :)

	Have a great day!

Lusy

Very cool. As well as some creative rephrasing, in general I think you should include the text that appears on the product. I REALLY like the "Objects at your finger tips" phrase. Consider adding that to the web site logo and other, if it can fit appropriately. Note that the originals were not so wrong, as I spent some with a thesaurus [1] to get it right.
[1] http://thesaurus.com

> Pharo wave in your mug will inspire for new achievements
For cool looks, get a Pharo wave on your mug to inspire great deeds. Goes well with any drink. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> Pharo Mug looks attractive with any drinks and will warm You by its orange mood.
The orange aura of this Pharo mug will warm your thoughts and spark small talk with your colleagues. Goes well with any drink. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> Send your mouse to the Smalltalk-inspired environment and start your Pharo-might from the desktop
Rest your mouse on a Smalltalk-inspired environment for the foundation of you Pharo desktop power. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> The usual things take on new meaning thanks to the only small circles
The usual things gain new meaning when blessed with small circles. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> Your beer mug will find its place on Bierdeckel and Beer-party with friends will be filled of new ideas
I don't know what Bierdeckel is. Some translations indicated it to be a drink coaster - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beverage_coaster. Do you mean this sticker should be sued to convert drink coasters. So I'm not sure about this one...
Stick this to coasters at parties so your drink can rest easy and inspire small talk with your friends. The ultimate live environment.

cheers -ben

Ben Coman

Re: http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

In reply to this post by Stéphane Ducasse

Stéphane Ducasse wrote:

> I would like to thank lusy and jeff for their effort.
>
> Dear All,
>
> let me introduce a new store "PharoShop"
> http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop
>
> Please note the products description -
> I'm not confident in my english and ready to accept your offers for inspire the customers :)
>
> Have a great day!
>
> Lusy
>
>
>

http://www.pharo-project.org/home
needs a link 'Merchandise'
fitting under 'Community' is probably reasonable.

cheers -ben

Stéphane Ducasse

Re: http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

In reply to this post by Ben Coman

lusy told me that she took into your comments :)

Stef

On Oct 12, 2013, at 5:24 PM, [hidden email] wrote:

Stéphane Ducasse wrote:
I would like to thank lusy and jeff for their effort.

Dear All,

	let me introduce a new store "PharoShop"
	http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

	Please note the products description - 
	I'm not confident in my english and ready to accept your offers for inspire the customers :)

	Have a great day!

Lusy


  
Very cool. As well as some creative rephrasing, in general I think you should include the text that appears on the product. I REALLY like the "Objects at your finger tips" phrase. Consider adding that to the web site logo and other, if it can fit appropriately. Note that the originals were not so wrong, as I spent some with a thesaurus [1] to get it right.
[1] http://thesaurus.com

> Pharo wave in your mug will inspire for new achievements
For cool looks, get a Pharo wave on your mug to inspire great deeds. Goes well with any drink. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> Pharo Mug looks attractive with any drinks and will warm You by its orange mood.
The orange aura of this Pharo mug will warm your thoughts and spark small talk with your colleagues. Goes well with any drink. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> Send your mouse to the Smalltalk-inspired environment and start your Pharo-might from the desktop
Rest your mouse on a Smalltalk-inspired environment for the foundation of you Pharo desktop power. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> The usual things take on new meaning thanks to the only small circles
The usual things gain new meaning when blessed with small circles. The ultimate live environment. Objects at your fingertips.

> Your beer mug will find its place on Bierdeckel and Beer-party with friends will be filled of new ideas
I don't know what Bierdeckel is. Some translations indicated it to be a drink coaster - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beverage_coaster. Do you mean this sticker should be sued to convert drink coasters. So I'm not sure about this one...
Stick this to coasters at parties so your drink can rest easy and inspire small talk with your friends. The ultimate live environment.

cheers -ben

Jeff Gray

Re: http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

Zazzle.com.au is the Australian site, because that's the one I started playing around with.
There are a host of international zazzles.

From how I recall the site working it auto translates product descriptions into other languages on the international sites automatically, so you end up with something that makes no sense, especially problematic if you employ pun and word play.

Marcus Denker-4

Re: http://www.zazzle.com.au/pharoshop

e.g.

http://www.zazzle.fr/pharoshop

On Tue, Oct 15, 2013 at 1:02 PM, Jeff Gray <[hidden email]> wrote:

Zazzle.com.au is the Australian site, because that's the one I started
playing around with.
There are a host of international zazzles.

From how I recall the site working it auto translates product descriptions
into other languages on the international sites automatically, so you end up
with something that makes no sense, especially problematic if you employ pun
and word play.

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