Hi,
Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/. Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read the text, you can tell me how it looks like. Bye -- Damien Cassou |
I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me).
Looks nice. Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page. Pictures of applications would be great (Scratch, Plopp, and OpenCroquet would make good candidates). On 9/17/07, Damien Cassou <[hidden email]> wrote: > Hi, > > Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have > made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX > sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/. > > Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read > the text, you can tell me how it looks like. > > Bye > > -- > Damien Cassou > > |
David Mitchell schrieb:
> I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me). > > Looks nice. > yes, definitely. > Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page. > VA Smalltalk is missing, and I think there were some more (I don't remember seeing Smalltalk MT). Cheers, Hans-Martin |
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Damien Cassou wrote:
> Hi, > > Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have > made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX > sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/. > > Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read > the text, you can tell me how it looks like. I would not be strong about the code "not being in files", because that's what file-ins do as ugly as the chunk format can be. Mentioning files in the context of the image can be confusing. I would say only that "the Smalltalk environment includes a persistent object store, the image. It contains the application code (classes and methods), the objects that compose the application state, and may even host a complete development environment to inspect and debug the application on the fly." That's because the development environment does not need to be included once the image is deployed. I would also alphabetize the glossary. Great job! Paolo |
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2007/9/17, David Mitchell <[hidden email]>:
> I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me). > > Looks nice. > > Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page. > > Pictures of applications would be great (Scratch, Plopp, and > OpenCroquet would make good candidates). I've included SyX, Plopp and OpenCroquet. Please see the new version: http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf -- Damien Cassou |
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2007/9/18, Hans-Martin Mosner <[hidden email]>:
> David Mitchell schrieb: > > I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me). > > > > Looks nice. > > > yes, definitely. > > Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page. > > > VA Smalltalk is missing, and I think there were some more (I don't > remember seeing Smalltalk MT). I've added VA Smalltalk too. I can't add all Smalltalks, I would not make much sense. Thank you for your comments and if you have ideas to fill the empty spaces, tell me. Bye -- Damien Cassou |
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Hi Paolo,
2007/9/18, Paolo Bonzini <[hidden email]>: > Damien Cassou wrote: > > Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have > > made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at > > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX > > sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/. > > > > Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read > > the text, you can tell me how it looks like. > > I would not be strong about the code "not being in files", because > that's what file-ins do as ugly as the chunk format can be. Mentioning > files in the context of the image can be confusing. I would say only > that "the Smalltalk environment includes a persistent object store, the > image. It contains the application code (classes and methods), the > objects that compose the application state, and may even host a complete > development environment to inspect and debug the application on the > fly." That's because the development environment does not need to be > included once the image is deployed. > > I would also alphabetize the glossary. Thank you for your comments. The flyer has been updated. http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf -- Damien Cassou |
Nice changes!
For the blank spaces, maybe a picture of some of the books. Could put a picture of Pier under the Seaside glossary. On 9/18/07, Damien Cassou <[hidden email]> wrote: > Hi Paolo, > > 2007/9/18, Paolo Bonzini <[hidden email]>: > > Damien Cassou wrote: > > > Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have > > > made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at > > > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX > > > sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/. > > > > > > Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read > > > the text, you can tell me how it looks like. > > > > I would not be strong about the code "not being in files", because > > that's what file-ins do as ugly as the chunk format can be. Mentioning > > files in the context of the image can be confusing. I would say only > > that "the Smalltalk environment includes a persistent object store, the > > image. It contains the application code (classes and methods), the > > objects that compose the application state, and may even host a complete > > development environment to inspect and debug the application on the > > fly." That's because the development environment does not need to be > > included once the image is deployed. > > > > I would also alphabetize the glossary. > > Thank you for your comments. The flyer has been updated. > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf > > -- > Damien Cassou > > |
2007/9/18, David Mitchell <[hidden email]>:
> Nice changes! > > For the blank spaces, maybe a picture of some of the books. Could put > a picture of Pier under the Seaside glossary. I don't have blank spaces anymore. The pdf has been updated http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf. Thank you -- Damien Cassou |
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