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Smalltalk flyer

Damien Cassou-3
Hi,

Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have
made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at
http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX
sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/.

Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read
the text, you can tell me how it looks like.

Bye

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Re: Smalltalk flyer

David Mitchell-10
I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me).

Looks nice.

Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page.

Pictures of applications would be great (Scratch, Plopp, and
OpenCroquet would make good candidates).

On 9/17/07, Damien Cassou <[hidden email]> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have
> made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at
> http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX
> sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/.
>
> Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read
> the text, you can tell me how it looks like.
>
> Bye
>
> --
> Damien Cassou
>
>

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Re: Smalltalk flyer

Hans-Martin Mosner
David Mitchell schrieb:
> I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me).
>
> Looks nice.
>  
yes, definitely.
> Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page.
>  
VA Smalltalk is missing, and I think there were some more (I don't
remember seeing Smalltalk MT).

Cheers,
Hans-Martin

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Re: Smalltalk flyer

Paolo Bonzini-2
In reply to this post by Damien Cassou-3
Damien Cassou wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have
> made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at
> http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX
> sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/.
>
> Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read
> the text, you can tell me how it looks like.

I would not be strong about the code "not being in files", because
that's what file-ins do as ugly as the chunk format can be.  Mentioning
files in the context of the image can be confusing.  I would say only
that "the Smalltalk environment includes a persistent object store, the
image.  It contains the application code (classes and methods), the
objects that compose the application state, and may even host a complete
development environment to inspect and debug the application on the
fly."  That's because the development environment does not need to be
included once the image is deployed.

I would also alphabetize the glossary.

Great job!

Paolo

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Re: Smalltalk flyer

Damien Cassou-3
In reply to this post by David Mitchell-10
2007/9/17, David Mitchell <[hidden email]>:
> I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me).
>
> Looks nice.
>
> Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page.
>
> Pictures of applications would be great (Scratch, Plopp, and
> OpenCroquet would make good candidates).

I've included SyX, Plopp and OpenCroquet.

Please see the new version: http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf

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Re: Smalltalk flyer

Damien Cassou-3
In reply to this post by Hans-Martin Mosner
2007/9/18, Hans-Martin Mosner <[hidden email]>:

> David Mitchell schrieb:
> > I can't read the text (my 6 weeks of 8th grade French are failing me).
> >
> > Looks nice.
> >
> yes, definitely.
> > Might want to include SyX Smalltalk on the implementation page.
> >
> VA Smalltalk is missing, and I think there were some more (I don't
> remember seeing Smalltalk MT).

I've added VA Smalltalk too. I can't add all Smalltalks, I would not
make much sense.

Thank you for your comments and if you have ideas to fill the empty
spaces, tell me.

Bye

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Re: Smalltalk flyer

Damien Cassou-3
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Hi Paolo,

2007/9/18, Paolo Bonzini <[hidden email]>:

> Damien Cassou wrote:
> > Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have
> > made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at
> > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX
> > sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/.
> >
> > Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read
> > the text, you can tell me how it looks like.
>
> I would not be strong about the code "not being in files", because
> that's what file-ins do as ugly as the chunk format can be.  Mentioning
> files in the context of the image can be confusing.  I would say only
> that "the Smalltalk environment includes a persistent object store, the
> image.  It contains the application code (classes and methods), the
> objects that compose the application state, and may even host a complete
> development environment to inspect and debug the application on the
> fly."  That's because the development environment does not need to be
> included once the image is deployed.
>
> I would also alphabetize the glossary.

Thank you for your comments. The flyer has been updated.
http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf

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David Mitchell-10
Nice changes!

For the blank spaces, maybe a picture of some of the books. Could put
a picture of Pier under the Seaside glossary.

On 9/18/07, Damien Cassou <[hidden email]> wrote:

> Hi Paolo,
>
> 2007/9/18, Paolo Bonzini <[hidden email]>:
> > Damien Cassou wrote:
> > > Serge and I (with the help of Damien Pollet and Alexandre Bergel) have
> > > made a Smalltalk flyer for french conferences. You can see it at
> > > http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf and download LaTeX
> > > sources at https://svn.squeak.org/Advertisement/flyers/smalltalk_fr/.
> > >
> > > Please give me comments and advice about it. Even if you can't read
> > > the text, you can tell me how it looks like.
> >
> > I would not be strong about the code "not being in files", because
> > that's what file-ins do as ugly as the chunk format can be.  Mentioning
> > files in the context of the image can be confusing.  I would say only
> > that "the Smalltalk environment includes a persistent object store, the
> > image.  It contains the application code (classes and methods), the
> > objects that compose the application state, and may even host a complete
> > development environment to inspect and debug the application on the
> > fly."  That's because the development environment does not need to be
> > included once the image is deployed.
> >
> > I would also alphabetize the glossary.
>
> Thank you for your comments. The flyer has been updated.
> http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf
>
> --
> Damien Cassou
>
>

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Re: Smalltalk flyer

Damien Cassou-3
2007/9/18, David Mitchell <[hidden email]>:
> Nice changes!
>
> For the blank spaces, maybe a picture of some of the books. Could put
> a picture of Pier under the Seaside glossary.


I don't have blank spaces anymore. The pdf has been updated
http://damien.cassou.free.fr/flyer-smalltalk.pdf.

Thank you


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Damien Cassou