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Hello,
I have now a challenge where I have to validate a ISBN number. Can I do something like this on the class side : (string isEmpty) ifTrrue: [ ^ false] ifFalse: [ digits:= something. controlDigit := something. self validateISBNNumber] where on the validateISBNNumber I use the instance variables digits and controlDigit to validate the ISBN number on the instance side. Roelof |
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Roelof,
I don't think so.
A Class cannot access instance
variables. Why? because a Class doesn't know which of its
instances to ask for it.
Ask yourself: who is "self" in a
Class method? Is it the Class or is it an individual instance of
the Class?
(Hint: in a Class, #self is the
Class, while in an instance, #self is the instance) .
"Who" do you want to validate the
ISBN number? An individual instance of your Class (like Book)?
Or is validating an ISBNNumber a Task that is independent of an
individual item? If it is independent, then why would you want
to use semething specific in that method?
You need to understand the
differences between Class and Instance variables. I suggest
reading Chapter 4 of "The
Art and Science of Smalltalk" or better: read the whole
book. It's easy to read and sparks quite a few A-HA's per hour.
HTH
Joachim
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Everything Joachim Tuchel wrote about this is fine EXCEPT that this is an Exercism task, where Roelof has to implement an API that he is given and is not at liberty to do it right. Thanks to the way that IsbnVerifierTest is structured, - the IsbnVerifier class has NO use for ANY variables of ANY kind: no instance variables, no class variables, and no class instance variables. - the IsbnVerifier class has only ONE method that is called, and that is on the INSTANCE side. That is, it's a simple pure function disguised as an object. A good design might have an ISBN class, and would put #isValidISBN10: and #isValidISBN13: on the class side. But to solve the Exercism exercises, you HAVE to implement the API that the test class is expecting, not something better. If it passes the tests, it is by definition right. If it doesn't, it is by definition wrong, even if it is a far better design. So - one class, IsbnVerifier - with no variables of any kind - with one and only one method, #isValidIsbn, on the instance side. It all gets so much clearer when you realise that the Exercism tasks are NOT designed to teach Object-Oriented Design. The problems have to serve many programming languages, some of which, like bash and x86 assembly code, are not object-oriented.
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Briefly, you cannot and (for a different reason) you should not. The IsbnVerifierTest class defines the API; the method must be isValidIsbn: aString and it MUST be on the instance side. The reason why you shouldn't is that an empty string should NOT be a special case. This is a problem where the design style described by Dijkstra in "A Discipline of Programming" and further fleshed out by Reynolds and Gries in related books pays off. You want to inspect all the characters of the string once each in a single left-to-right loop. On Wed, 2 Sep 2020 at 18:19, Roelof Wobben via Pharo-users <[hidden email]> wrote: Hello, ... [show rest of quote] |
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Yep, I know that isValidIsbn is the method that must output if a isbn is
valid or not. What I want to do is take the first 9 characters out so I can convert them to a array of numbers where I can do the calculation on. And take out the last char so I can seperate test if that is a valid char. So between the 0 and 9 or a X I do not think I would have do all the checks in that only method because it would be a very big method then. but if I understand you well also the test if a string is empty should be called from the isValidIsbn method or even checked there. Roelof |
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There is simply no point in "taking the first nine numbers out". And there shouldn't BE a test for the string being empty, anywhere. '' '-' '---' and so on should all be handled the same way. Oh well, what stops you doing digits := aString select: [:each | each ~= $-]. digits size = 10 ifFalse: [^false]. lastDigit := digits la ost. digits := digits copyFrom: 1 to: 9. ( (lastDigit = $X or: [lastDigit isDigit]) and: [ digits allSatisfy: #isDigit] ) ifFalse: [^false]. Now my code does not do this, but it is just 16 lines of code with nothing that it would make sense to extract. On Wed, 2 Sep 2020 at 22:24, Roelof Wobben <[hidden email]> wrote: Yep, I know that isValidIsbn is the method that must output if a isbn is ... [show rest of quote] |
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Correct. This is a exercism task. and yes, there are no variables given but that does not in my oponion means that I cannot add a instance or a class variable I myself was thinking about adding two instance variables named digits which hold the first 9 characters and a variable named controlDigit Can I do it then this way 1) Check if the string is empty , if so return false otherwise made a new object like this in IsValidIsbn isValidIsbn: aString if aString isEmpty ifTrue: [False] ifFalse: [ self new digits := something. controlDigit := something.] I can also do what I think you are describing isValidIsbn: AString if aString isEmpty ifTrue: [ ^false] ifFalse: [ISBN isValidIsbn10] and then as you describe so have a isValidISBN10 method in the class side where I do the check there so the class ISBN has the two instance variables digits and controlDigit Roelof |
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Op 2-9-2020 om 12:38 schreef Richard
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Nothing only that I could not think of this one for myself. If I do it the TDD way I come more on the way Im currently thinking but does this case then be covered test14_EmptyIsbn | result | result := isbnVerifierCalculator isValidIsbn: ''. self assert: result equals: false and still I have to do the calcualation to see if it's valid. If I understand the code well I can use the digits variable ? Roelof |
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Op 2-9-2020 om 12:52 schreef Roelof Wobben via Pharo-users:
So no more hints from other people? Roelof |
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What part of "return false if there are not exactly 10 characters left after discarding dashes" fails to handle the empty string? A test case for the empty string is is only valuable if the empty string is NOT a special case. On Wed, 2 Sep 2020 at 22:52, Roelof Wobben <[hidden email]> wrote:
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oke, then I could use your idea but
then I have to make the code for calculating if its a valid
number.
and I wonder if the code will not be too big. I learned that it is good that a method does only 1 thing and this one seems to be doing more then 1 thing. Roelof Op 4-9-2020 om 05:24 schreef Richard O'Keefe:
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Nope, with your idea I cannot make this
part work :
he ISBN-10 format is 9 digits (0 to 9) plus one check character (either a digit or an X only). In the case the check character is an X, this represents the value '10'. These may be communicated with or without hyphens, and can be checked for their validity by the following formula:
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Maybe this is a naive question, but can you just split the task into the
following two? 1. Check whether whether the string is syntactically an ISBN number. This can be done, e.g., using a regex. 2. Check the the check character. Calculate the check character from the (now to be known) syntactically valid string. ISBNValidator>>isValidISBN: aString ^(self isSyntacticallyValid: aString) and: [self isCheckCharacterValid: aString] Kind regards, Steffen Am .09.2020, 07:35 Uhr, schrieb Roelof Wobben via Pharo-users <[hidden email]>: > Nope, with your idea I cannot make this part work : > > he ISBN-10 format is 9 digits (0 to 9) plus one check character (either > a digit > or an X only). In the case the check character is an X, this represents > the > value '10'. These may be communicated with or without hyphens, and can be > checked for their validity by the following formula: > > (x1 * 10 + x2 * 9 + x3 * 8 + x4 * 7 + x5 * 6 + x6 * 5 + x7 * 4 + x8 * 3 > + x9 * 2 + > > so I mean the calculation. > > > Roelof > > > Op 4-9-2020 om 06:45 schreef Roelof Wobben: > > oke, then I could use your idea but then I have to make the code for > calculating > if its a valid number. > and I wonder if the code will not be too big. I learned that it is good > that a > method does only 1 thing and this one seems to be doing more then 1 > thing. > > Roelof > > > > Op 4-9-2020 om 05:24 schreef Richard O'Keefe: > > What part of "return false if there are not exactly 10 characters > > left after discarding dashes" fails to handle the empty string? > > A test case for the empty string is is only valuable if the > > empty string is NOT a special case. > > > > On Wed, 2 Sep 2020 at 22:52, Roelof Wobben <[hidden email]> wrote: > > Op 2-9-2020 om 12:38 schreef Richard O'Keefe: > > There is simply no point in "taking the first nine numbers out". > > And there shouldn't BE a test for the string being empty, anywhere. > > '' '-' '---' and so on should all be handled the same way. > > > Oh well, what stops you doing > > > digits := aString select: [:each | each ~= $-]. > > digits size = 10 ifFalse: [^false]. > > lastDigit := digits la ost. > > digits := digits copyFrom: 1 to: 9. > > ( (lastDigit = $X or: [lastDigit isDigit]) and: [ > > digits allSatisfy: #isDigit] > > ) ifFalse: [^false]. > > > Now my code does not do this, but it is just 16 lines of code with > > nothing that it would make sense to extract. > > > > Nothing only that I could not think of this one for myself. > If I do it the TDD way I come more on the way Im currently thinking > > but does this case then be covered > > test14_EmptyIsbn > | result | > result := isbnVerifierCalculator isValidIsbn: ''. > self assert: result equals: false > > and still I have to do the calcualation to see if it's valid. > If I understand the code well I can use the digits variable ? > > > Roelof > > > ... [show rest of quote] |
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Hello,
I solved it but with what I find one big ugly code isValidIsbn: aString | digits lastDigit acc | digits := aString select: [ :each | each ~= $- ]. digits size = 10 ifFalse: [ ^ false ]. lastDigit := digits last. digits := aString allButLast asOrderedCollection select: [ :each | each isDecimalDigit ] thenCollect: [ :each | each digitValue ]. ((lastDigit = $X or: [ lastDigit isDigit ]) and: [ digits size == 9 ]) ifFalse: [ ^ false ]. acc := digits with: (10 to: 2 by: -1) collect: [ :digit :multiplier | digit * multiplier ]. ^ ((acc sum + (lastDigit digitValue min: 10)) % 11) isZero Can this be improved some way ? Roelof Op 4-9-2020 om 07:35 schreef Roelof Wobben via Pharo-users:
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Op 6-9-2020 om 10:07 schreef Steffen Märcker:
> Maybe this is a naive question, but can you just split the task into the > following two? > > 1. Check whether whether the string is syntactically an ISBN number. > This can be done, e.g., using a regex. > > 2. Check the the check character. > Calculate the check character from the (now to be known) syntactically > valid string. > > ISBNValidator>>isValidISBN: aString > ^(self isSyntacticallyValid: aString) and: [self isCheckCharacterValid: > aString] > > Kind regards, > Steffen nder if the code will not be too big. I learned that it is good > ... [show rest of quote] Sorry to respond not earlier but your respons seems to be in the spam folder of my provider. I could do that but if very bad in regex so I do not know a regex which van validate 123456789 or 123-456-78-9 Roelof |
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No problem. I am not knowledgeable about isbn numbers. At which places may a dash occur?
Kind regards, Steffen 07.09.2020 16:18:22 Roelof Wobben via Pharo-users <[hidden email]>: > Op 6-9-2020 om 10:07 schreef Steffen Märcker: >> Maybe this is a naive question, but can you just split the task into the >> following two? >> >> 1. Check whether whether the string is syntactically an ISBN number. >> This can be done, e.g., using a regex. >> >> 2. Check the the check character. >> Calculate the check character from the (now to be known) syntactically >> valid string. >> >> ISBNValidator>>isValidISBN: aString >> ^(self isSyntacticallyValid: aString) and: [self isCheckCharacterValid: >> aString] >> >> Kind regards, >> Steffen nder if the code will not be too big. I learned that it is good >> > Sorry to respond not earlier but your respons seems to be in the spam folder of my provider. > > I could do that but if very bad in regex so I do not know a regex which van validate 123456789 or 123-456-78-9 > > Roelof > ... [show rest of quote] |
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See here for all the tests :
https://github.com/exercism/pharo-smalltalk/blob/master/exercises/isbn-verifier/IsbnVerifierTest.class.st#L88 Roelof |
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Hi,
after reading the link and some additional sources, it turns out that a valid ISBN-10 has either no separators or four blocks separated by either dashes or spaces: Group-Publisher-Title-CheckDigit Assuming Regex11 (and that I made no mistake), the following should do the trick: IsbnVarifier>>isSyntacticIsbn: aString "no groups" noGrouped := '\d{9}[0-9X]' asRegex. "groups separated by either dashes or spaces" dashes := '\d{1,7}-\d{1,7}-\d{1,7}-[0-9X]' spaces := '\d{1,7} \d{1,7} \d{1,7} [0-9X]' grouped := (dashed , '|' , spaces) asRegex. ^(aString matches: nonGrouped) or: [(aString matches: grouped) and: [aString size = 10 + 3]] Surely, you could cleverly compress the regex even further but that does not matter for this example. After checking the syntax, you can just iterate over the string and compute the check-digit on the fly. Kind regards, Steffen Am .09.2020, 18:19 Uhr, schrieb Roelof Wobben via Pharo-users <[hidden email]>: > See here for all the tests : > https://github.com/exercism/pharo-smalltalk/blob/master/exercises/isbn-verifier/IsbnVerifierTest.class.st#L88 > > Roelof > > > |
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Now having a Workspace at hand, I fixed some minor typos:
IsbnVarifier>>isSyntacticIsbn: aString | nonGrouped dashes spaces grouped | nonGrouped := '\d{9}[0-9X]' asRegex. "groups separated by either dashes or spaces" dashes := '\d{1,7}-\d{1,7}-\d{1,7}-[0-9X]'. spaces := '\d{1,7} \d{1,7} \d{1,7} [0-9X]'. grouped := (dashes , '|' , spaces) asRegex. ^(aString matchesRegex: nonGrouped) or: [(aString matchesRegex: grouped) and: [aString size = (10 + 3)]] Best, Steffen Am .09.2020, 19:01 Uhr, schrieb Steffen Märcker <[hidden email]>: > Hi, > > after reading the link and some additional sources, it turns out that a > valid ISBN-10 has either no separators or four blocks separated by either > dashes or spaces: > Group-Publisher-Title-CheckDigit > > Assuming Regex11 (and that I made no mistake), the following should do > the > trick: > > IsbnVarifier>>isSyntacticIsbn: aString > "no groups" > noGrouped := '\d{9}[0-9X]' asRegex. > "groups separated by either dashes or spaces" > dashes := '\d{1,7}-\d{1,7}-\d{1,7}-[0-9X]' > spaces := '\d{1,7} \d{1,7} \d{1,7} [0-9X]' > grouped := (dashed , '|' , spaces) asRegex. > > ^(aString matches: nonGrouped) or: > [(aString matches: grouped) and: > [aString size = 10 + 3]] > > Surely, you could cleverly compress the regex even further but that does > not matter for this example. After checking the syntax, you can just > iterate over the string and compute the check-digit on the fly. > > Kind regards, > Steffen > > Am .09.2020, 18:19 Uhr, schrieb Roelof Wobben via Pharo-users > <[hidden email]>: > >> See here for all the tests : >> https://github.com/exercism/pharo-smalltalk/blob/master/exercises/isbn-verifier/IsbnVerifierTest.class.st#L88 >> >> Roelof >> >> >> ... [show rest of quote] |
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There are two quite different questions. (1) Where may dashes occur in a real ISBN-10? (2) What does Exercism require in the specification and check in the test cases? For (1) the rules are Each ISBN consists of 5 elements with each section being separated by spaces or hyphens. Three of the five elements may be of varying length:
An ISBN-10 does not have the three-digit prefix. So we have [0-9]{1,5} -- prefix [0-9]{1,7} -- registrant [0-9]{1,6} -- publication [0-9X] -- check digit As an examplw, "Standard C++ IOStreams and Locales" by Langer & Kreft has ISBN-10 0-201-18395-1 ISBN-13 9780201183955 so I shall assume the separators are optional. /^[0-9]{1,5}[- ]?[0-9]{1,7}[- ]?[0-9]{1,6}[- ]?[0-9X]$/ Of course the elements cannot all have their maximum length at the same time. In AWK I would write x = a_putative_ISBN_10 y = x gsub(/[- ]+/, "", y) if (x ~ /^[0-9]{1,5}[- ]?[0-9]{1,7}[- ]?[0-9]{1,6}[- ]?[0-9X]$/ \ && y ~ /^[0-9]{9,9}[0-9X]$/ \ ) { x *might* be valid, we still need to check the checksum } For (2), there appear to be no restrictions on where dashes may occur or how many: "These may be communicated with or without hyphens". Exercism doesn't allow spaces. Regular expressions are elegant in their own way, BUT for this problem they are (a) excessive, (b) inefficient, and (c) insufficient. digit count := 0. check sum := 0. for each character c of the string if c is not a hyphen then if c is a digit then digit value := c's value as a digit else if c is X and digit count = 9 then digit value := 10 else return false. digit count := digit count + 1. if digit count > 10 then return false. check sum := (11 - digit count) * digit value + check sum. return check sum mod 11 is zero. Part of the insight here is "don't DO it, just PRETEND you did." That is, instead of copying the string without the hyphens, just ignore the hyphens as they turn up. Another part is "if you are only going to use it once, don't store it." That is, we need a digit's value just once, in the update to check sum, so we should compute it just before we need it, not store it. Now the pseudo-code above is classic sequential imperative coding. Classic functional coding does something like let no_dashes = filter (/= '-') (explode string) in length no_dashes = 10 and let check = last no_dashes in (is_digit check or check = 'X') and all is_digit (take 9 no_dashes) and let xval c = if x = 'X' then 10 else digit_value c in dot (map xval no_dashes) [10,9..1]) mod 11 = 0 This pseudo-code translates nicely to Smalltalk too. You might want to add SequenceableCollection>> with: other inject: initial into: aBlock |r| r := initial. self with: other do: [:x :y | r := aBlock value: r value: x value: y]. ^r dot: other ^self with: other inject: 0 into: [:acc :x :y | x*y + acc] (These methods are so obvious that it would be absurd to claim any intellectual property rights to them.) I also have "fusion" methods like SequenceableCollection>> from: start to: finish allSatisfy: testBlock self from: start to: finish do: [:each | (aBlock value: each) ifFalse: [^false]]. ^true so that ((seq copyFrom: a to: z) allSatisfy: blk) can be done as (seq from: a to: z allSatisfy: blk) without making a copy. Fusion methods are useful because Smalltall compilers don't work as hard at eliminating intermediate data structures as functional language compilers. (Having other priorities.) (isdigit (last no_dashes return false if digit count > 10. On Tue, 8 Sep 2020 at 03:02, Steffen Märcker <[hidden email]> wrote: No problem. I am not knowledgeable about isbn numbers. At which places may a dash occur? ... [show rest of quote] |
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